Monday, 14 October 2019

The Fancy Dress!




Last night I went to the fancy dress with my Oma, Opa, Nana, mum and dad, my sister

and brother didn’t come though. I was dressed up as a white angel and my partner Kasey

was dressed up as a black angel. 



My class danced second to last, our dance was called Strip the willow, after every class

dance, every class had a small little thing of ice cream, to be honest I thought it would

be smaller. After I ate all my ice cream I went home. My family all missed out doing

the Macarena because my mum wanted to go home.  She was tired and she had worked

all day so she wanted to go home, so we did.



When we were walking to the car I was wearing heels and my feet started to hurt so

I took my heels off. My mum said I wasn't allowed to walk in bare feet so my dad bent

down and he was gonna give me a piggyback ride so I jumped on his back, and he fell

over so he stood up and bent down more and I rided on his back all the way to all car.

When we went home we went straight to bed.

3 comments:

  1. Hi Lilie, Great story!!

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  2. Niiiiiiiiccccccee

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  3. Hey Lilley! In the second paragraph I think you should put some full stops in there. I also recommend that you explain the dances a little more :D

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